You recently had a negative experience at a local restaurant. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter
- describe what made your experience negative
- describe what would have made the experience better
- ask him for an apology and a refund
Dear owner of Green Tree Restaurant,
I am Jakir, and I am a loyal patron of Green Tree for the past few years, my family and I dine at your establishment at least once a month. I am writing this letter to inform you of the disappointing time I had at your venue last Friday.
Firstly, I would like to bring your attention that it took over ten minutes for the waiter to take us to our seats even though the restaurant was half empty. Then, it took another ten minutes to get the menus, not to mention the additional half hour we had to wait before our order was taken. When I confronted the waiter about our order taking so long, he rudely dismissed my concern and told me just wait my turn. After our food arrived, our negative experience continued. I always eat chicken tandoori because it is one of the best in the city. However, this time around not only was the chicken cold but side of salad also was not fresh. Though I complained to the waiter about this, he simply deflected my concern and told me and talk with his manager. In order to avoid this type of bad experience, and retain the usual quality, I would like to suggest that you begin an inquiry on what happened last Friday and give attention where needed.
Last but not least, as a regular at your venue, I request a written apology for last Friday as well as a full refund of our meal. Please find the receipt attached.
Your valued customer,
Jakir
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, then, well, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39097744361 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31493490726 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8752790213 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176763020825 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559419840023 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562107728734 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101830078184 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270059278877 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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