The table below gives information about UK independent films.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about UK independent films.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The prescribed table demonstrates the type of independent movies that have released in the UK and Republic of Ireland in the year 2012.

Overall, drama and documentary are on the top list in terms of release frequency and major income comes from comedy films.

There is clear evidence that drama and documentary all together account for half of the total releases (46%) around the year 2012 where as a whole 148 movies released and drama and documentary contributes 35 each. In the second position, horror and thriller category are almost identical which are 14 and 13 per year respectively. Biopic movie stands at the least released genre and only a single production has been launched which accounts for less than 1% (0.7% exactly).

In terms of revenue by ticket sells to the viewers, comedy films are contributing the most. Although, documentary and thriller has about 50 contents together, net income is relatively low which are 2.9 and 1.3 percent of cumulative sales. Albeit, the romance category released 5 movies annually, it brought less than one percent of total movie income.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10555555556 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64679517367 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3745318319 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0491641252685 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232528594388 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033159856666 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415394175178 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366545754087 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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