Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apply as a volunteer in your organization “Kindle the Old” in response to an advertisement which was published on 5th May, 2019 in a local newspaper.
To be honest, I am an avid volunteer from the very beginning of my student life and I find these activities really enjoyable. I have worked with several reputed unpaid organizations especially with the elderly patients with several lethal diseases and who are expected to have an extremely low life span in future. Usually, I have worked as a book reader as well as story teller in the local hospitals to entertain the critically ill geriatric patients.
As your advertisement asked for the candidates who have the ability to work with the gray people, I think, I can strongly meet the job responsibilities. My resume is attached herewith with the related experience certificates. I will be available for any interview at your convenient time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours
A T M Jakir Alam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2019'.
Suggestion: May 2019
...dvertisement which was published on 5th May, 2019 in a local newspaper. To be honest,...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...cted to have an extremely low life span in future. Usually, I have worked as a book reade...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01162790698 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12267219954 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5565920308 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111981680124 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439120763075 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373015314067 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074829335742 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342146812272 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.