You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event:
1. Explain why you are interested in helping
2. give details suitable past experience
3. suggest ways you might help with the event
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard to the advertisement published in the Times of India newspaper on Sunday. The advert was asking for some volunteers for a dancing event, which is going to be held on the next weekend in the town hall of the city. I would like to participate in this charity function.
I am very much interested in helping for two main reasons. First and foremost, the reason for this free service is the cause of this event is very noble because the revenue from this function will be given to various orphanages. The second reason for the participation is dancing, as it is my hobby. I like to perform various shows and it would be my pleasure if my dancing skills can be valuable to others.
I can prepare a traditional dance for my performance. The duration of the act could be 5 to 15 minutes and this can increase or decrease depending on the programme schedule. I would love to be an active volunteer for this noble deed.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Harman Kaur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60427807487 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67960865682 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593582887701 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2739978381 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138009831594 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524371917394 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519945694082 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096254989146 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311515485739 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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