Essay topics: You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say-describe what you left and where it happened-why are these papers important-what would you like the manager to do about it

Essay topics:

Essay topics: You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say
-describe what you left and where it happened
-why are these papers important
-what would you like the manager to do about it

Dear manager of Trust Taxi Service,

I am A T M Jakir Alam and I have recently availed a taxi service a couple of days ago. Unfortunately, I dropped one of my official files in that car.

I went to Chottogram from Dhaka to conduct my regular corporate monthly meeting on 12 February 2019. While I was returning to the airport from the hotel Agrabad I called one of the taxis of your company numbered GA340987 to catch the flight to Dhaka at around 10 am. Since I was running out of time to check in, I told the driver to step on it, and fortunately, I could reach at the airport on time thanks to his maneuver. To my surprise, I noticed that I left my important official file on the car while the plane was ready to take off.

This file contains confidential information regarding the tender documents of my company. If the documents are unveiled to an unwanted person, it might cause severe negative consequence to my employer organization.

In this circumstance, I would like to request you to send the related papers to my address which has been attached with the letter and notify me to my email jakirph12345@gmail.com after sending.

I look forward to receiving the documents as early as possible.

Thanks in advance

Jakir

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...te monthly meeting on 12 February 2019. While I was returning to the airport from the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96980673885 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3368446298 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129033990325 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390595635534 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453952084135 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070442175003 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447069672517 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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