Essay topics: You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say-describe what you left and where it happened-why are these papers important-what would you like the manager to do about it

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request your help in finding a black jute bag that I left in one of your taxis.

I boarded the taxi number 507 from Bristol layout at 5.30 pm last Saturday and alighted the taxi at Embassy Pristine around 6.30 pm. I left a black jute bag that has my initials 'RK' embossed in the front. The bag contains some really important documents such as my original mark sheets and degree certificates. As I was about to get off at Madivala, there was an elderly couple that needed assistance in crossing the road and I offered them help. I must have left the bag when I rushed to help the old people.

The documents in the bag are essential for my admission to a reputed university that has offered me a scholarship to pursue my studies. It would be really grateful if you could inquire the driver of taxi number 507 about the bag. I can come at pick the bag at your lost and found center office in Bangalore.

Looking forward to your response with regard to the bad and the documents.

Yours faithfully,
Rajie

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...axi at Embassy Pristine around 6.30 pm. I left a black jute bag that has my initi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, such as, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42783505155 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42603956634 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8940985624 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127100053552 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456259832159 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04693763796 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652051744724 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041624086004 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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