Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter -explain the reasons for the noise -apologize -describe what action you will take

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter -explain the reasons for the noise -apologize -describe what action you will take

Dear Mrs Jessica,

I am writing this letter in response to your complaint regarding the noise you have been experiencing from my apartment for the last couple of days. I completely understand your concern and I would like to apologize for the inconvenience that I have made to you and your immediate family.

As you know, we are doing some renovation at our house considering some upcoming family program. As part of this, we are moving our furniture from one room to another and performing repainting the walls. Because my house is quite big and it is having three bedrooms, the interior decorating process is taking longer time than expected. To make the matter worse, the hired technicians are sometimes dragging their ladders inconsiderately, resulting in an unbearable noise experienced at your flat which is just under my floor.

However, I have already made a plan to troubleshoot this soon after getting your letter. I decided to hire more workforce to accomplish the task as soon as possible and I will also make sure that the process runs only during the office hours so that no one will be there at your home to be disturbed.

I again regret the disturbances during this process and I really appreciate the tolerance you have shown from the inception of the refurbishment of my domicile.

Yours sincerely,

Kumar S Sampad

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, regarding, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95154185022 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85756089905 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63436123348 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2036851237 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362422797856 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136324921555 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916468642413 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199959602022 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128504209848 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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