Dear Amit,
I am very shocked to hear from you about the noise from my house. It has spoiled your evening and distracted your sleep. I am really very sorry and had no idea about the same, please accept my apology.
I hired the carpenter for door repair in the kitchen, while fixing it I got to know that the appliance almirah was also broken. So I thought to renovate all my kitchen rather repairing the same as it was out of trend. It is taking time as the work can only be done in my presence after coming back from office.
Kitchen has still not completed, it will take 2-3 days more as the parts of the door are not available. I will try to call him in the morning rather in evening now.
Sorry to cause problem.
Anmol
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amit, I am very shocked to hear from you abou...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...t completed, it will take 2-3 days more as the parts of the door are not available...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 599.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27857142857 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10513221263 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4322890694 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5555555556 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167557670599 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640536537898 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828940613962 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789517776698 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895632503306 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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