You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter•Explain why you have moved•Describe the new house•Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Sajad,

Hello. How is it going? Great, right?. I am super excited to share the news that I have recently relocated from my old place.

Let me explain my situation in more detail that moving to a new place has many reasons. Firstly, the old house was not spacious and had parking issues all the time. Secondly, there were plumbing difficulties which tried to be repaired plenty of moments but couldn't be restored.

About the new area where we shifted is providing a bunch of amazing amenities like a huge playground in the vicinity, the supermarket is within walking distance. Building management assists in numerous aspects such as if there will be any hurdle with the maintenance they are there for round the clock and the last but not least, sunset and sunrise view is incredible from our windows.

I am expecting your presence at my new domicile and have a blast very soon.

I will be waiting for your writing.

Your friend,

A T M Jakir Alam

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ed to be repaired plenty of moments but couldnt be restored. About the new area wher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75147928994 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51034064635 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727810650888 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8150657504 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153353065388 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522023098849 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621962805967 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07014475626 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382097271051 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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