Write to the manager of your bank. Explain where and how you lost the card and any other relevant details. Ask the manager to cancel the old card and to send you a replacement.

Essay topics:

Write to the manager of your bank. Explain where and how you lost the card and any other relevant details. Ask the manager to cancel the old card and to send you a replacement.

Dear Sir,
I am writing to confirm the loss of my credit card. I telephoned your office earlier today.

The details of my card are as follows. It is an Apex Silver card in the name Jorge Luis Banderas. The credit card number is 4531 7602 2597 8413. I have had an Apex card since 1994. This card is valid from August 1995 to August 1996.
I lost the card yesterday at about 10:30 in the evening. The only time I used the card yesterday was to buy three bottles of wine at the Sharp Price Liquor Store in Oxford Street. By accident, I left the card at the drop. When I realized I had done this, I telephoned the shop, but the shop assistants there could not find the card.

Could you please cancel my card immediately and make the necessary arrangements to issue me with a replacement card? I can be contacted at the above address.

Thank you for your assistance.

Yours faithfully,

Jorge Banderas

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Silver) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...rd are as follows. It is an Apex Silver card in the name Jorge Luis Banderas. The cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48502994012 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38117143659 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0971759473 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.9333333333 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1333333333 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246430210012 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837605482945 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453992139197 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140522542133 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015770089944 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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