Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, tackling environmental contamination has become a pressing matter around the world. While a number of people believe that this issue can mostly be handled by the national and international level, others claim that personal involvement may also contribute to the improvement. There are arguments on both sides which we will discuss here.
On the one hand, it might be said that as environmental pollutions have a vast impact on the whole mankind, measures to alleviate these issues can only be imposed by the strong dominating bodies like government and international organizations. Furthermore, this kind of activities require a huge involvement in financing and even, in some cases, altering the existing codes of laws which is beyond the control of personal interest. To justify, Bangladesh, a small south Asian country, has banned two-stroke vehicles from the street in the year of 2000 by making the new law to reduce the content of unburned hydrocarbon in the air which played a significant role in improving the air quality, especially of Dhaka city.
On the other hand, personal involvement can also play a pivotal role in improving environmental conditions. Building awareness can also have a major role in alleviating negative environmental consequences by doing less harm to nature and, at the same time, initiate activities to improve environmental parameters. As a result, when it occurs simultaneously, it will generate great improvement in national as well as universal level. For example, stop dumping waste in the open air and using fuel-efficient hybrid car both can have a positive effect on nature by reducing air pollution particles and carbon dioxide emission which, ultimately, controls the global warming.
To recapitulate, both governmental bodies and individual involvement can play a vital role to save our nature. I assert that an integrated approach will have a significant positive impact on the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, kind of, as a result, as well as, in some cases, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42295081967 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21045389992 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3979566622 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165648883162 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588146128466 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398383797206 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100889574635 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302185267409 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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