Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time for children and they think that their children should only read serious educational books.
What is your opinion?
In recent years, the reading habits of the youngsters have been gaining a great deal of attention among the rearing parents. Most importantly, the issue has been a bone of contention among the guardians on spending hours with reading materials for entertainment rather than educational contents. While many parents consider reading books for enjoyment is just wastage of time and the kids should focus on knowledge, however, I would contend that children must get some freedom to entertain themselves with books rather than serious and knowledge-based contents.
On the one hand, the competition for getting good grades are growing day by day mostly in developing countries. Hence, the parents consider that their offsprings must spend time wisely and always should focus on a specified curriculum. That is why, to them, entertainment is a less important issue for higher marks and it is a misuse of valuable time. Moreover, children, these days are leading their life with the predetermined compact schedule by their parents and teachers. Therefore, literally, they do not have enough time to think about reducing stress with funny books. In relation to this, parents consider reading educational books even in leisure time will help their kids utilizing the time in the best possible approach and making them ready for future battle.
Conversely, some guardians consider that the total educational system and the society are trying to push their kids into the unhealthy rat race of getting good marks and ending up with high salaries. In most cases, these create extreme mental pressure on the psychology of the soft-minded beginners. Therefore, these parents are thinking about to break this vicious cycle by giving freedom to their kids. Thus, when it comes to reading comics, storybooks or other funny books for entertainment, they encourage their children more positively. The child psychologists from the developed countries also suggest that these approaches are better for improving children’s imagination as well as socialization to the environment. Furthermore, these liberal parents believe that education is required but not in expense of the tender childhood with boring books of geometry or physics. Rather, they feel that reading funny books can be a constructive source of entertainment which is far better than spending time on-screen with mobile games.
All things considered, conventional syllabus-based reading materials in leisure time cannot be a productive approach to develop a better future. Personally, I believe, entertainment is crucial for every kid and pertaining to that context, books are always a harmless friend indeed.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46246973366 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9282868936 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561743341404 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9618065612 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419453403037 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120061444163 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071425010482 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253465216157 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701880151655 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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