Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time for children and they think that their children should only read serious educational books What is your opinion

One of the conspicous trend of the today's world is a collosal upsurge in the number of people beliveing that, _NP. There is a wide spread worry that this will lead to amyrid concerns in once life. However, I do not entierly accept this, and I will explain this in my essay.

Thaere are number of arguments in favor of my stance. Most prepondarant one is that, PP and there are numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers not only one benefit, more when it comes to being effective with much ease efficasy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead. As far as agumenting the chances of prosperity and excellance is concerned.

Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned preposition is that, it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varid areas. Besides when only one follows such a system can they broden their horizons. Thus learning such attributes as dedication and preservance. Hence, it is appreant why many are in favor of... PP.

In the views of the outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of ___PP are indeed too great to ignore.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70149253731 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58411619198 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3453220973 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0311349947718 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100662987166 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230963174077 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171333122036 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232700118982 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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