Should cigarettes and other tobacco products be outlawed?
A matter of considerable controversy at present issue is whether, tobacco related and Cigarette products should be ban. On the other word, Government should keep minimum criteria to sale and consume these items. both side of this contentious issue will be put under scrutiny and my opinion as to which holds more weight will be given.
To begin with, a variety of advantages can be put forward to explain why, tobacco related consumables need to remove from market. Firstly, it is impacting on the countries youth generation and creating less productivity, as well as impacting on overall healthiness of world. As per recent survey conducted by world health Organisation (WHO), due to consumption of tobacco and smoking products in india causes at around 10 million deaths every year, which shocking news for entire globe as well as for india. Secondly, in india now days at around 2.2 billion people consumes tobacco on daily basis and it is around 12% headcount of global participation out of 100%. this is not only impacting on the countries growth but also impacting on overall health pattern across the whole region.
On the other side of this issue, ultimately, we are all working and earning for out daily needs and we have freedom to do so, hence such restriction on such items may lead to attack to democracy and loss in trust on the administrator. In addition to above, people in the region think about their personal growth.
In conclusion, considering both side of this issue, while there are strong points on both side of case, and my opinion goes with administrator should make minimum criteria to consume such products, and create awareness among the citizens for continuous growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00352112676 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69622450144 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3336088148 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.25397266985 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212958376514 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775572226326 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957637197337 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121523974109 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122157856163 0.0609392437508 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.