Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together Discuss both views and state your own opinion

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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

one of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is the number people believing that the studying with different abilities students are good. There is widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. however, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.

There are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prepondarent one is that the students with different abilities can know about normal students, can not only contribute to understanding, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only one can benefit more, when it comes to being effective, but can enhance the productivity and quality of their lives.

There are, however, some pitfall that can easily overwhelm potential benefit of disabled students which are not directly connected with normal students. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing aforementioned trend, people have not reliased it gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussion when it comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle.

In the view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks of students while studying with different abilities candidates are indeed too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20476190476 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73776395511 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4291896182 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.444444444 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216791637937 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881562133671 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978451305829 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142212532506 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592791197069 0.0609392437508 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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