Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is waste of time for children and they think that their children should only read serious educational books. What is your opinion.
Books are the great source of knowledge. You can get different experiences through your imagination by reading books. Parents are strict towards the educational scores of their kids hence it is essential for their career growth. For this parents always force kids to read and study the educational books and not the story books. However some parents are against of it.
Firstly, kids can earn more knowledge in their school days. It's a time when their brain is developing and they can understand the things more quickly. Colorful books or a story books can boost the imagination of kids and it can help them to grow and make a positive development. Secondly, children who read the story books are more happy and active than the kids who read the serious books. In addition every child has a right to enjoy their childhood the way they want. For instance, survey took by "World Child Health Organization" shows that 75% kids are having the mental illnesses which cause by stress, because of the changing education system.
However, serious books can give the many benefits to the children. Serious books are related to the fields like politics, science, mathematics, history and these are crucial for children to develop their logical thinking. In the career prospective educational books are the essential. For example, if any student want to make a career in robotics then he has to understood all the mathematical and scientific concepts and its only possible when he learn through the educational books.
In conclusion, both the educational and entertaining books are important for the children. I think it would helpful for children if their parents allow them to read both kind of books when it is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05944055944 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72447633219 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1162282161 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441771931242 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141391930407 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904843243846 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293971049447 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750987631281 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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