You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- Explain why you want to work in the companies head office for six months.
- Say how your work could be done while you away.
- Ask to his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Tayler,
I am expressing my willingness to come to our Canada office for period of six months. Recently, I have successfully completed five years in India office and I have promoted to designation as 'lead Engineer'. This is certainly exciting phase in my professional life with more responsibilities in future. Trully, I really need prior induction training from department managers at our head office which will much help me in handling challenges in our daily project assignments.
I can understand that if I will come there for more months then there is indefinite problem of resource at our local office. I think that I would manage by doing more work by my own and sometime share balanced with other co-workers as require basis. At last, we will think about to hire a new candidate at local office who can be trained before I will arrive there.
I hope you will completly agree with what I am saying about to visit there. I am very much intersted and optimestic about to visit our office. I believe you heard about our organization people interaction program which allow local office individuals to come to our abroad office. However, I will need your recommendation letter which invite me for business or work visit. Also, It will excellent if you could direct conversation with our engineering manager and he would agree you to do so. Looking for your co-operation and support.
Your's faithfully,
Ryan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ssional life with more responsibilities in future. Trully, I really need prior induction ...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_NNS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'more months than'?
Suggestion: more months than
...nderstand that if I will come there for more months then there is indefinite problem of resource...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...at if I will come there for more months then there is indefinite problem of resource...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to visit there. I am very much intersted and optimestic about to visit our office...
^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d optimestic about to visit our office. I believe you heard about our organizatio...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87300353386 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3436878255 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6428571429 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202736554723 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755774164686 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588173044384 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123183392927 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477853480621 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.