Some people believe that teaching chldren at home is best for a childs development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both motheds and give your opinion.
Overall growth of child is depend on environment where they are learning. It's undeniable that healthy surrounding offers a positive vibes to kinds so that they can learn more quickly. Several people argued that home schooling is best for the overall progress of teenagers while, others believe that traditional method of schooling is correct. They feel children have to go to school to learn a basic fundamentals to survive in life and i support the same way.
Firstly, when parents take decision to educate their child at home, it's completely depends on their personal issues. Specially celebrities and people who don't have a stable job sites choose the home schooling for their kids. However, their busy life don't allow them to spend much time with their kids hence, they fail to deliver proper attention to them and their study suffers. Secondly, at home if there is one parent who is totally free to concentrate on educating the child then child can learn more efficiently. In other words, one person can teach more effectively to one kid also he can support him or her in their drawbacks and guide in the correct way. Thirdly, parents know more about their child than any other so they can teach them complicated educational theories in smooth way. Therefore education at home gives the child better knowledge in comfortable and healthy way.
However, there are some pro's which traditional schooling method has which are beneficial than the home schooling. In school qualified teachers can give proper knowledge on every subject. Most essential part on human life is social network which easily create in school. Teenagers from dissimilar families, different backgrounds and nature learn together in school hence, they become friends with each other. They shares different ideas and thoughts which gives confidence to them to interact with the people. Schools offer knowledge as well as other basic ethics to kids such as sharing, cleaning, socializing, team bonding and helping. Foe instance, study done by the World Education Organization shows that, children from schools are 60% smarter than the kids who learn at home. Sport is another reason to educating child in schools as it gives change to kids to select the game in which they are interested and make their career in that. Overall, teaching in school train the kids to become successful in practical world and develop them mentally and physically.
To sum up, I believe that both the methods has some advantages but teaching teens in schools offers the extra benefits. It's essential for everyone to understand the level of intelligence child has and then educate them in a convenient way so that they become successful in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07399103139 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55259088056 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4818665543 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.863636364 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31818181818 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253402639601 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812334263391 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629333971362 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168896653117 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229150196866 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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