You recently organised on all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for Lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel, In your letter
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel.
- Explain why they were unhappy about the food.
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
To,
The Manager,
Novotel Hotel.
I am writing this letter to express my disappointment about food ate in last week induction program. We have arranged a one day program for our new joining staff at your MG Road hotel on Wednesday, 23rd July 2019.
The new staff members were contented about your hotel locality and overall ambiance. Also, metro station is walking distance from the hotel, they found it convenient for travel. In addition to this, your staff delegation and stationary provided for induction program was superior in terms of welcome drink, notepad and pen.
However, As per the response received from attendees after program completion was the awful food quality. Everyone had sorrowful experience about lunch. The vegetables available in main course was uncooked and not chopped well. Many one has mentioned about bad taste and odor of lentil. We got some pictures for them too.
Therefore, I would like to advice you some improving recommendations while preparing food. While you planned for such event please buy fresh and clean vegetable from authorized vegetable store at least one day before. Please instruct your chef to look diligently into kitchen activities and taste the food before serving to attendees. These will definitely comes with some good outcome.
I am looking forward to your quick action in above matter.
Your's faithfully,
ABC
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 229, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun one seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many ones'.
Suggestion: Many ones
...urse was uncooked and not chopped well. Many one has mentioned about bad taste and odor ...
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Line 11, column 358, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...ing to attendees. These will definitely comes with some good outcome. I am looking...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28959276018 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58674766602 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723981900452 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8310802624 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7647058824 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275005990901 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073539795072 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445706477599 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125113608476 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630267736967 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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