You have lost an item of value on a train.
Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
- describe the item.
- explain where and when you left it.
- say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
C-Train Company.
I am writing this letter to report missing briefcase on a train journey.It contain vital visa documents papers and include few currency notes. It is small approximately 2 x 3 inches, grey in color and handle in middle. There is a brand name 'VIP' mentioned on front side.
Firstly, I was commuting from my office near central station to my home (park station). I mostly prefer your train service as there was lot of traffic congestion on roads. Last friday, when I took 6:30 pm train from central station and get down at park station. When I reached my home I realised that I have forgotten my briefcase inside train. I have immediately runs to park station to report the missing item but they advised me to write a memo to railway company.
In fact, I would like to propose some actions which would helpful to find my item. Firstly, kindly circulate the missing report to all train station officers and appraise them about if they notice such item they have to contact me. Another thing, They can check CCTV footage of next stations where we can trace if someone has stolen the item from station. This will certainly benefit to find missing item. Please note my personal email and contact number if they will get any details.
Looking forward to your co-operation.Thank you.
Your's faithfully,
Dev D
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Looking forward to your co-operation.Thank you. Yours faithfully, Dev D
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, another thing, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78205128205 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52251531169 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649572649573 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5127067928 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9375 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201067152361 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620916758196 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470940366925 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107914331288 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311029011931 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.