Over the last 100 years food diet change considerably.Some argue we have sacrificed health over convenience, others say we have the richest diet ever. What do you think. Give the reasons and examples to support your answer.
There have been dramatic changes in people lifestyle and eating habits over last few years. In my view, in the competition of achieving luxurious lifestyle and plenty amount of wealth people are ignoring their well-being. Eating pre-prepared food is one of the reason, why majority of population is unhealthy.
Firstly, the biggest reason i can state is the globalization. In other words, changing lifestyle and increase in industrialization and other modern entities, everyone want a high-profile life hence, race for the money begins and people started ignoring their diet and exercise for the extra professional work. Secondly, raising the money for the home is not only mans job, women also support them financially by doing work related to their profession. Therefor, responsibilities of women rise, they have to handle households as well as office works so they started finding the quick alternatives for the chores like cooking. For the everyday meal they start using frozen food, cereals for breakfast and other fatty snacks like pizza, burger for the evening breakfast. This change in diet lead the obesity in many people as well as in the kids. For instance, according to survey of World Health Organization obesity in kids in the year 2018 is 55% in respect to total population.
In other hand, people started taking the health problem seriously and they are joining the fitness clubs. We have the proper food which is rich in vitamin and minarles like organic vegetables however, it is too expensive because of it's less production. Some people like body builders are leaning towards the supplements and vitamin tables but sometime this chemical products are harmful for bodies and they have the negative effect instead of the muscular body. Some diet need proper meal as well as exercise, but due to the work culture people don't find time for the workout and they get peaky.
To sum up, vitamin rich diet is crucial for the well body and healthy lifestyle therefore, people have to take it seriously and need to find time from their work for the daily workout. We need to focus on the testy as well as homemade food instead of the snacks. Although exercise need some extra efforts, its worth to do it for lively and joyful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, in my view, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98404255319 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60785347142 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2801468339 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.235294118 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15598210556 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055880907878 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364392401673 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100651425805 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00688548734145 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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