Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Gifts are the expression of love we can pass to someone to convey them that how much valuable they are. There are tremendous variety of gifts available in market however, money is the crucial one in some occasions. There are several people who argued that money is the best gift for teens but others disagree with it. I believe giving money to the poor children as a gift may be a great idea.
Firstly, it's extremely beneficial to school girls and boys to receive money as a gift specially when they belong to the poor families. They can spend that money on an educational and other needs such as, stationer's, uniforms, game they like. Secondly, It's necessary to inform their parents when you give money as gift to child so they can use that money to pay their educational fees or the educational trip expenses. Thirdly, many teens save money in their piggy banks for later use. Money as a gift can add some value in their piggy banks and they feel more motivated to save the money. Doing such things can teach them to respect money also, children can buy gifts from that money to their parents and then that gift will hold the greatest value and the happiness.
However, children from the wealthy families don't need money. Their parents take care of everything they need hence, giving money to such kids my be dangerous. children can misuse the money due to their lack of knowledge in practical world. Sometime teens spend money on unnecessary items such as chocolates, video games, extra pairs of shoes and so on. The other crucial thing to notice is that kids can use money for any illegal activity like buying drugs or unhealthy product without concerning their parents therefore, we have to be very sure when giving money as a gift to teenagers.
To sum up, I believe parents are capable to offer everything to their children. We can give any necessary product kids want instead of money. If we know someone who is really needy then its great idea to give money to parents so they can use that for their child or for any other financial difficulty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64754098361 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29965229304 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489071038251 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6569332693 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231707991432 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942883473087 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593238820726 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17675143417 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534694602324 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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