A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.-Describe your point of view-Say what you like about the show and why.-Ask the newspaper to take some action.

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A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.

Submitted by jakirph365 on Mon, 12/17/2018 - 02:26

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to express my deep disappointment with the article recently published in your magazine about the culinary program, Master Chef which was broadcasted a few weeks ago. The reporter of your publication Mr. John presented the host of that show, Mr. Sam Conner in an undesirable way.

It is true that Mr. Sam shows his temper little harshly on the participants, I personally adore him for his excellent cooking skills and being fair towards the contestants. He always tries to give honest and constructive feedback to aspiring new chefs. Moreover, he offers good cooking suggestions to the viewers. I find these advises very useful as I am a chef by profession. In this circumstance, this sort of negative news certainly affect the viewers as well as the participants of the program detrimentally.

Therefore, I would like you to issue a stern warning to your reporter not to write such meaningless articles and request you to refrain from publishing such one-sided report going forward.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

John Smithson

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an undesirable way" with adverb for "undesirable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d the host of that show, Mr. Sam Conner in an undesirable way. It is true that Mr. Sam shows his t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, therefore, well, sort of, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15555555556 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97767412755 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711111111111 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8825950515 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175484494175 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530204957904 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528367955871 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102468764033 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566454459811 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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