A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my deep concern with the article recently published in your magazine about the culinary program, The Master Chef.
The Master Chef is a famous TV program for the last five years and it is one of the demanding reality show among the people who are keen to culinary things. This program always disseminated motivation to the young chefs who want to build their career in the same track. Besides, it provides huge tricks and tactics for everyone who wants to be creative in the kitchen. I think, your journalist, Mr. Sam Conner could consider the program as a learning session for all the participants rather than taking it personally.
I am one of the fans of that program and I like the culinary skills of the host and his fairness towards the contestants. Although he sometimes expresses little impatience to the participant chefs, it is quite natural in a reality show and his constructive feedback outweighs everything. For this reason, the show is being viewed worldwide and the host is being considered as a celebrity among the young chefs.
I would like to suggest reconsidering while writing in a newspaper about a celebrity chef and to explain to the journalist in a constructive way.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John Smithson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...Chef. The Master Chef is a famous TV program for the last five years and it is one o...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a constructive way" with adverb for "constructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y chef and to explain to the journalist in a constructive way. I look forward to hearing from you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93303571429 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77001284141 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1652599832 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185722824964 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640300922889 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483222673675 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104202782733 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448897664675 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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