Essay topics: The office where you work does not have a proper car park. Write a letter to your manager and say
– Explain the problem of no parking space available.
– Suggest a solution for the car park problem.
– Explain how this will help your company.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to address an issue regarding the car park crisis for the existing employees of our company which has been a major concern recently.
As you know, due to a major expansion of our company wings three new portfolio has been added with us, resulting in a hike in the employee numbers since the last quarter of the year. As a result, the number of self-driven cars has also increased by almost 50 percent, but, unfortunately, the available car parking facility remain the same. As a result, about half of the cars have to be parked outside the parking area, usually on the street which resulted in an increased number of traffic violation tickets for the last couple of months, causing an extra financial burden on the colleagues.
In this circumstance, we need an additional car park which can be managed by the adjacent unused field. For this reason, a fund of some 10,000 Doller is required to be released from the trust. If the new car park is built, a sheer number of our workers will be able to use it comfortably that will enhance productivity as well as the convenience of us which ultimately lift the motivation to work.
To alleviate the suffering of us, you are requested to take an initiative to build a new car park.
I look forward to taking positive action in this regard.
Yours sincerely,
A T M Jakir Alam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'portfolio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'portfolios'.
Suggestion: portfolios
...xpansion of our company wings three new portfolio has been added with us, resulting in a ...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e car parking facility remain the same. As a result, about half of the cars have t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, well, you know, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68312757202 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65747412167 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5488367555 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253675534186 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102072741379 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525689672079 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132657414021 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536883726494 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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