Essay topics: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request my enrolment in a training course recently advertised on the website of exact.com.
Let me explain my situation in detail. As you are aware that our company has recently decided to migrate our accounting data to Exact accounting software. Being the Head of the Credit Control department, I will be directed affected by this new change. It is essential for me to complete this training course not only to understand all the relevant features but also to ensure the correct implementation of the software which also help the company to achieve full advantage of this new software.
Keeping in view the above considerations, it is kindly requested to make the booking for me to attend the course as well as any travel and accommodation arrangements. The training course is currently being conducted once every month with limited seats at the head office of Exact in Birmingham.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Kind Regards,
Mal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08982035928 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90980998613 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664670658683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5634385983 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221310398289 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695148696966 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041946920886 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122092986377 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174261049936 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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