Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some people that the a person's selection of dresses can give much information about their culture and character. However, not everyone agrees with this idea.
While it is possible to tell about a person's culture up to some extent from their attire, it is hard to judge one's character solely on that basis. For example, a if a person is wearing a Tradition Asian dress, it can be suggested that the person belongs to the Asian culture but making an assessment on his personality with the same yardstick is not only subjective but also immature. Similarly, it is also not always possible to predict someone's culture on the choice of his dressing style. For instance, if a British person participating in Chinese festival occasionally decides to wear a Chinese festival dress, it would be wrong to associate that person with Chinese culture.
The person's dressing habit does not provide any information about their personal traits, judging someone's character by their choice of clothing would be same as judging a book by its cover. It cannot be argued that the person possesses a good character just because of their nice dressing style because we can see large number of examples from our daily lives where not everyone wearing nice, expensive and branded dresses portrays a high standard of character. Take Harvey Win-stein for example who wears expensive dresses and enjoyed luxurious lifestyles due to his highly influential position in Hollywood actually turned out to be a person with bad character who is now facing lot of sexual harassment charges against him. Likewise, it cannot be opinionated that people having simple dressing style definitely always have good moral values and character.
In conclusion, the dressing style can sometime give a true picture about someone's culture but cannot be cannot be used on a large scale to correctly reflect person's cultural and personal values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6467891052 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526984126984 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2944845193 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.454545455 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260411544028 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119124747455 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086377886721 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17798272896 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476597910686 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.