Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time.
Apply in writing to: You see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory.
Write a letter to the organisers of the course. In letter: Give some background information about yourself.Explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course. Enquire about the methods used on the course. Enquire about course fees and dates.
Dear Sir,
Concerning your advertisement in the local newspaper for a memory course, please be apprised that my name is John, working in multinational company Google as a Senior Programmer. The advertisement has drastically attracted my attention to this course. However, seeking help to alleviate the memory problem seldom incurred while travelling, communicating and working. For example, sometimes fail to remember the destination when travelling. Besides, this has caused many problems in my daily routines due to this lots of hassles needs to be faced.
Furthermore, seeking for further details about the course and its design not mentioned in the advertisement is as follows:
What is the duration of the course?
Commence and end date of the course?
What pre-requisites are to attend the course?
Any medicine usage would be needed to improve memory or based theoretically.?
What is the fee for the course?
The classes scheduled on a weekly or daily basis?
I look forward to hearing from you regarding my questions at your earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Moses Quinn
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, look, regarding, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1013168316 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1110648002 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3076923077 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261635634024 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861372055826 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555383407405 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105153209239 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492168150812 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.