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You see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory. Write a letter to the organiser of the course. In the letter
• give some background information about yourself
• explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course
• enquire about the methods used on the course
• enquire about course fees and dates
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with your advertisement, which I have seen in the magazine recently.
My name is Sarah Brown, I am a manager in a small dynamically developing company. My company is going to participate in a competition, namely, our target is a large contract provided by the local council in the area which we are only starting to discover. Due to the short period for preparation, my team and especially I have to conduct gigantic research and gather information from many sources. I used to remember all the stuff without any problems, but now I feel that it requires strong efforts from me. That is why having an excellent ability to memorize would be extremely beneficial for me.
Taking into consideration the given information, I would like to know the details about the methods you use. Also, I would really appreciate it if you could provide me information about the cost of the course and the date of the beginning.
Thank you kindly in advance. Looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah Brown
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97206703911 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92578531654 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68156424581 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6868608705 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9090909091 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126563856894 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423863965499 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203750703989 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696335059661 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00849816907349 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.