Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time.
Apply in writing to: You see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory.
Write a letter to the organisers of the course. In letter: Give some background information about yourself.Explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course. Enquire about the methods used on the course. Enquire about course fees and dates.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express interest in your advertisement, that I have seen in my newspaper this morning. I would like give you some necessary details about my personality and my certain problem in memorising. I always think that I have very good memory, but in the past time I have trouble and sometimes forget important information for my own life. I think it happen because I work very hard. My job occupation is construction estimating and I need to remember a lot of information and numbers it hit my memory. And It become weak for regular life.
After having seen your advertisement I would like to know how you develop human memory and what kind of methods you use? It is very important for me, because I try to increase my memory skills every day by use famous easy methods. Maybe your technical could be better for me. Also, could you please give me information of timetables and how much is your course cost.
I look forward to your reply and I would appreciate duple appreciate it if you could answer me by e-mail. Thanking you for your assistance in advance.
Your sincerely,
Olga Choklia
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y and my certain problem in memorising. I always think that I have very good memo...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...hat I have very good memory, but in the past time I have trouble and sometimes forget imp...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... important information for my own life. I think it happen because I work very har...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...information for my own life. I think it happen because I work very hard. My job occupa...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...on and numbers it hit my memory. And It become weak for regular life. After having ...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se? It is very important for me, because I try to increase my memory skills every...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71202876091 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.177412077 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8461538462 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197025950549 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735548729044 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414376299809 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133390500205 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458442403594 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.