In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there is tendency that small local shops or markets have closed because of costumers who prefer to go to larger shopping centres. This fact can has positive and negative sides.
On the one hand, people can have good opportunities by going to huge shops choosing different types of products. The majority of amount of shopping malls have vary of food products or clothes. For example, there can be special food for allergenics or vegetarians. Other benefits that there can be clothes for all gentles and children too. So, families probably will save time of buying everything necessary just in one huge shop. There is absolutely advantageous for families to go to this kind of shops instead of local small ones.
On the other hand, it is obvious that people perhaps will not travel to malls every day. During a work week people often do not have enough time to go to malls. Because of size this kind of shops parents can spent evening hours for buying products. Sometimes it is important to have small shops near home for example for buying some bread or milk for breakfast. Even more children needed some basic things urgent thus small shops in this case can be extremely helpful. Consequence, in some unpredictable life circumstances huge shopping centres and malls can bring unhelpful benefits.
To summarise, these developments it is obvious that it can be positive and negative due to certain circumstances. Also, it depends on people preferences. As our modern society can choose what is more convenient and comfortable the shop owners offer us different types of shops and markets.
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Suggestion: have
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Suggestion: varied
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00373134328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65726924904 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3990124339 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8823529412 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273900338096 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935189423629 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545250872047 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186664412965 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561229132671 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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