A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you but you can’t do so.
• Tell her the reasons for that
• Apologize to her
• Make alternative arrangements
Hi Donna,
It’s such a pleasant surprise to receive your email and i’m so happy to hear that you finally got some time to make a visit to my country.
I would rather love to make your stay at my country a memorable one. However, i’m extremely sorry for not able to invite you this time to stay at my home. As you know, two months from now, my youngest daughter Jeanne is getting married. Before her wedding, I and Jon had thought of renovating our home as wedding reception party is planned to happen at our place. Coincidentally, your travel and my house renovation dates falls on same time.
Meanwhile, I can make arrangements for your stay at my sister lily’s place. Currently, Lily and Alec are out of country and will be back from their holidays only by the time of Jeanne’s marriage so that means, you can have the complete house for yourselves. I apologies for the inconvenience caused to you. Even though, you are at lily’s place, you can stop over at our place for anytime. Also, taste some of my delicious countryside recipes.
Further, I ‘d like to remind you not to get any other items from there other than swiss chocolates. We’re all eagerly waiting to see you soon.
Take care.
Cheers,
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ome time to make a visit to my country. I would rather love to make your s...
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...renovation dates falls on same time. Meanwhile, I can make arrangements for y...
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...e of my delicious countryside recipes. Further, I 'd like to remind you no...
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Suggestion:
...see you soon. Take care. Cheers, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, incidentally, so, while, mind you, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6629501217 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65296803653 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9218808757 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5384615385 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339486529706 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107629633763 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715686846206 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200236479104 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512546380289 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.