You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department',you have not received your bag yet.
In your letter:-
(1) write the details of incident
(2) inquire the status of your lost bag to airline
(3) tell what you want if the bag is not found
Dear Sir/Madam,
I, jonathan, writing this letter hoping that an immediate inquiry will be carried out to address my grievance. Eventhough, I had registered my complaint with the lost and found department, I didn’t get my luggage.
The incident took place on 20th March, last Thursday while traveling on United airlines UA213 from Atlanta to Boston. We were informed by airline stewardess that our luggages will be on belt 2 while disembarking the flight. However, even after waiting for twenty minutes, I along with two other passengers couldn’t locate our luggage. Eventually, this made us to file a seperate complaint with lost and found department.
I would like to inquire on the current status of my complaint registered (complaint # 168389) for missing Samsonite Red color suitcase. On the web portal, it shows status as ‘issue addressed’. Unfortunately, I haven’t yet got my luggage which contains my research documents and all the hard copies relevant for my thesis submission.
I am extremely dissatisfied with the service provided by your airlines. In case my luggage isn’t found, I would rather have to take step by filing a legal suit against the airlines. The legal pursuit for the mental harassment and valuable research works.
hope to see an immediate action from your end.
Thanks in advance.
Your’s sincerely,
jonathan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4537037037 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05759587301 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6386326355 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118281334077 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454934592296 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049681813443 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877783591082 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563956407263 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.