You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.
1)thank you your friend for the holiday
2)explain that you left your wallet in their house
3)give them instruction of how to send back to you.
Hi Sam,
i’m extremely thankful to you and your family for arranging such a fantastic holidays. I could vouch it as once in a lifetime kind of vacation everyone dreams about. i’d a great time with you guys and can’t even realise that time went so fast.
I think i’d left my wallet in the white wardrobe of guest room at the rear end of your house. it’s easy to find as soon as you open the first door of wardrobe, the wallet will be in the shelf at your eye level. This wallet is of brown leather with my initials J.T engraved in golden. Although, it doesn’t contain unavoidable documents for example my company related ID cards or driving license. I can survive for few more days without my wallet.
As you know i’m currently held up with hectic work due to overload as such it will be exhausting for me to commute all the way to your place. However, I would need you to hand it over to my colleague David who lives in your neighbourhood.
Please let me know your convenient time in morning or evening so that he can come over and collect it from you. Catch up later on during weekends.
Take care.
Cheers,
Jon
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Hi Sam, i'm extremely thankful t...
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...kind of vacation everyone dreams about. i'd a great time with you guys and can&ap...
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...ven realise that time went so fast. I think i'd left my wallet in the w...
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...est room at the rear end of your house. it's easy to find as soon as you open the ...
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... is of brown leather with my initials J.T engraved in golden. Although, it doesn&...
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...for few more days without my wallet. As you know i'm currently held up w...
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... David who lives in your neighbourhood. Please let me know your conve...
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Suggestion:
...ing weekends. Take care. Cheers, Jon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5619047619 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47048793917 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0324485733 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291228143671 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888313154955 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763143468681 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181738903933 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348572251305 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.