11/10/2017
You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Explain why you need a holiday.
– Explain why you want your friend to come.
– Where and when do you want to go?
Hi Sam,
Hope you are doing good? As you know, I had been planning for a holiday to europe since ages finally it is coming to a reality.
We both know how hectic our work life has been and now that it’s almost close to our retirement in month of February, I felt it would be the right time to plan on our pending holiday to europe.
I thought of going ahead and booking up a two week long holidays both of us after this coming easter. Based on your suggestions, I can plan the itinerary and also, figure out the best accommodation. While skimming through the websites, I had spotted few extremely great deals including those of some earlybird offers.
I have already ordered a new camera lens to capture the picturesque beauty of European nature. also, get my fishing gears and hiking shoes in good condition.
I will call you up as soon as possible and let you know in detail about our holiday plan.
Take care
Cheers,
Joe
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Sam, Hope you are doing good? As you ...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ages finally it is coming to a reality. We both know how hectic our work li...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an on our pending holiday to europe. I thought of going ahead and booking up ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...luding those of some earlybird offers. I have already ordered a new camera lens...
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Line 8, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... picturesque beauty of European nature. also, get my fishing gears and hiking shoes ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and hiking shoes in good condition. I will call you up as soon as possible a...
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...il about our holiday plan. Take care Cheers, Joe
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Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... holiday plan. Take care Cheers, Joe
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54970760234 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41941351978 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719298245614 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2028279638 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182358121524 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672506458422 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772180626741 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107929371777 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093322614008 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.