A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime.
Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter:
– Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase
– Give the reasons behind your decision to leave
– Suggest possible alternative areas that you know
Dear Marry,
hope you are doing great. It's been a long time that I wanted to write you a letter, however, I was excessively busy. Harry was telling me, that you are buying a house nearby us. however, I would like you to reconsider the decision.
Recently, I get to know that, that you have put in an offer on a house in the village of cheddar, south-west England. But I would suggest you to cancel this deal with the property dealer. this area is associated with a high rise in crimes and hence is not secure anymore.
Besides, I and my family are also planning of leaving this area because of an incident that we have faced, a week ago. Two men, with covered face and a gun, just entered our house and tried to harras us. Moreover, they snatched the car key and a wallet from my hand and just ran away.
For this reason, we are planning to choose a rent house in the downtown area of Qouram shatti. I have visited this area, the society is well secured and the place is economical as well. So, I recommend this to you as well.
hope, to listen from you soon.
Best wishes,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Marry, hope you are doing great. Its been a lon...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...cel this deal with the property dealer. this area is associated with a high rise in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wallet from my hand and just ran away. For this reason, we are planning to choo...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
... I recommend this to you as well. hope, to listen from you soon. Best wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38536585366 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21302186934 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2892720282 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2142857143 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155261929057 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501793187113 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281683812354 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792418849982 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305079760242 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.