A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend78
In your letter
Give contact details for when you are away
Give instructions about how to care for your pet
Describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake
Dear Jonas,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am so glad that you agreed to take care of my snowy and the apartment on such a short notice, a sigh of relief.
I have to mention 3 points, while I am out of town. Firstly, the internet might be a challenge there so we can connect over phone call if needed.
Secondly, he is a persian cat so he needs to be in normal temperature and his cat-food is stacked in the fridge which needs to be feed twice in the day, meanwhile I have pinned a post-it for his belongings on the board.
The last one is to close the doors and windows in the night when leaving the house. Do not worry, I will the clean the rooms before leaving. Just make sure to take care of both, the house and the pet.
Thank you so much. I will come within 4-5 days soon. See you soon.
Take care.
Warm wishes,
Joe
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ch a short notice, a sigh of relief. I have to mention 3 points, while I am ou...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14880952381 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07408662246 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5675847163 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0833333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142071834911 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510346880746 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482025313832 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722143791467 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512470879245 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ch a short notice, a sigh of relief. I have to mention 3 points, while I am ou...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14880952381 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07408662246 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5675847163 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0833333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142071834911 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510346880746 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482025313832 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722143791467 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512470879245 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.