You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
explain why you want to leave your current job
describe what kind of job you are looking for
ask for some help or advice
Dear Anna,
How have you been? I hope all is well with you. I’m glad to know that you are adjusting well to your new job. In fact, I’m writing to you today to give you the latest updates about my work situation and ask for some advice.
I’ve finally decided to leave my current job as a teacher and try venturing into the field of corporate management. I’ve finished a business course from the University of Cleveland and feel ready to put my new degree to use. As you know, I’ve been a teacher for more than eight years and while I do enjoy what I do, I feel it’s time for the next step in my career.
For this next career move, I was hoping to make it into the field of textile and clothing manufacturing given that I’ve always been interested in the fashion industry. Besides, there are quite a few clothing design companies in the state of California which should make the job search a bit easier for me. That’s why I was hoping that you may be able to give me some advice on what my next step
should be since you made a similar transition not too long ago. I’d appreciate any tips or connections you could provide. Also, I would like some help with building my new resume, so if you could give some tips on that too, I’d be grateful.
I hope to hear from you soon. I’d like to know all about the new job and the new apartment. Until then, stay safe and have a great week.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: IT_IS[10]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
... and while I do enjoy what I do, I feel it’s time for the next step in my career. ...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun clothing seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little clothing'.
Suggestion: little clothing
...on industry. Besides, there are quite a few clothing design companies in the state of Califo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, may, so, then, well, while, i feel, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29213483146 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19338198829 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2757396088 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343607812488 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112442492693 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659611685407 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183744460783 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802376460034 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.