A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing well. Although it’s been a hectic week for me as I was busy preparing for my vacation next week to Bali however on the other side I felt relieved when you agreed to look after my house and pet dog snowy for a few days. I really appreciate your help.
Further to this let me share some important details and instructions with you which you will need while you stay here. Firstly I will carry my mobile phone and would be reachable on the same local number. I would prefer if you text me since it much cheaper in comparison to voice calls. Secondly, you need to feed snowy pedigree and milk twice a day in the morning and evening. The dog food is kept in the kitchen on the shelves located beside the refrigerator however if he doesn’t eat pedigree you could feed him boiled chicken which is kept inside the refrigerator. Additionally, I have told Smith he will come every day to take snowy out for morning and evening walk.
Lastly, you need to water the plants every day in the balcony and a technician will contact you tomorrow as he will be coming to fix the refrigerator.
I hope you will enjoy your stay at my home and do text me in case of an emergency.
Best wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ays. I really appreciate your help. Further to this let me share some important det...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nowy out for morning and evening walk. Lastly, you need to water the plants eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40789473684 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42278018075 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2894852023 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217386950195 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727957039241 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599535765207 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138055861563 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717091063702 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.