Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends, others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and love. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that the only way to show love and care for your relatives and friends is through gifts rather than other mediums. In my opinion there are other ways of showing affection towards your friends which are more effective than presenting gifts. This essay will present both views with relevant examples and conclude with an opinion.
First and foremost in modern society there is a growing culture of giving presents amongst teenagers who believe that such materialistic object can impress and help in cultivating stronger bond between two individuals. Additionally parents who are working shower gifts on their children in order to compensate for not being able to spend quality time with their young ones. A recent research revealed that in United Kingdom around 70 percent of guardians feel that they should present gifts to their adolescents as had a feeling of guilt for not being able to spend time with their kids.
On the other side there are people who believe that there are better ways to show affection and care rather than sending gifts as such these objects have a limited shelf life. The argument presented is that in times of difficulty one should spend quality time and emotional support which can make the bond stronger. For instance if your relative is sick in a hospital it would be better to spend quality time with him and offer him moral support which can make his recovery easier.
To conclude, it is very important to show love and affection to our loved ones but it can’t be necessarily through gifts. Helping others in difficult times is the best way to show your affection.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... stronger bond between two individuals. Additionally parents who are working shower gifts on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90579710145 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3994153177 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7354934627 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283793408249 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11350106945 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692108755819 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184784827255 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974667933895 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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