Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends, others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and love. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Exchange of gifts on special occasions is a centuries old norm, and it is believed by some people that this is a vital way to convey your affection with others. However, others think that this is not the only proved method to show someone your love; there are several other ideas which can be effective to express your sentiments. I believe that exchange of gifts is, undoubtedly, traditional way to pour love but limited as well.
People always make efforts to develop strong bonding with their family members and friends and to accomplish this; they usually take support of expensive and attractive presents. Even they spend money and time on choosing gifts because they want to amplify their affection with family and friends through valuable presents. In addition, when people cannot express their emotions in words, then they consider that gifts can do this. This way gift receiver not only appreciates the gift but also start believing that he is important to them. Although sometimes a wrong choice can do the opposite, buying gifts wisely is also equally important.
On the other hand, some people believe that offering support to your relatives and friends at the time of need is a more louder way to showcase your care for them because it is a famous phrase “ a friend in need is a friend indeed.” Furthermore, a pure and genuine moral support cannot be substituted with gifts like a pair of shoes or a mobile phone. For the people who value emotions and feelings, monetary gains in the form of gifts are less or not important to them.
I personally value moral, emotional and physical assistance more than things as gifts. Indeed, gifts are one of the oldest forms of transforming your inner thoughts to someone; however, it is also a narrow way to do so. When my mother could not give me a present on my last birthday, I did not start thinking that she does not love me anymore. Since I have seen her doing efforts for my betterment on several occasions, therefore, I was aware about her affection for me. Her feelings are not dependent of any gift.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a century' or simply 'centuries'?
Suggestion: a century; centuries
...change of gifts on special occasions is a centuries old norm, and it is believed by some pe...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'louder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: louder
...es and friends at the time of need is a more louder way to showcase your care for them beca...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fts are less or not important to them. I personally value moral, emotional and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77008310249 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52353810459 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548476454294 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3807640268 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197696313604 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605928420245 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496371238829 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119048276952 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478787147843 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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