A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing well. Although it’s been a hectic last week as I was busy preparing for my vacation to Bali however on the other side I felt relieved when you agreed to look after my house and pet dog snowy for a few days. I really appreciate this kind gesture.
Further to this let me share some important details and instructions which you will need while you stay here as it will make things easier for you to manage. Firstly I will carry my mobile phone and would be reachable on the same local number. I prefer communicating via text messages since it much cheap in comparison to voice calls. Secondly, you need to feed snowy milk and pedigree two times a day preferably in the morning and evening. If he doesn’t eat the usual stuff then try feeding him boiled chicken which is kept in the refrigerator. All the pets’ food items like pedigree, dog biscuits are kept in kitchen shelves. Additionally, you will also need to take him for a brisk walk in the morning and evenings every day.
Lastly, please don’t forget to water the plants every day which are in the balcony and since the refrigerator is not cooling properly you can call a local technician who can visit and fix this problem.
I hope you will enjoy your stay at my home.
Best wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...eally appreciate this kind gesture. Further to this let me share some important det...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47073602175 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662393162393 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1305407107 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6153846154 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194925184071 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557700083619 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637021126129 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118934767277 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595380227768 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.