Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other news
Dear Jon,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to inform that I have recently changed jobs. Let me explain in detail.
As you are aware the last time we spoke I was working with a satellite service provider in India and handling presales activities for the domestic market. Although the role was challenging however it provided limited global exposure which was the major reason for switching to a new job. Additionally, I wanted to work for a global satellite operator which would make my profile stronger for futuristic opportunities. The new job is based in Dubai and my primary role is to provide techno-commercial support to the global sales team. Furthermore, the interesting part is that the job would require a bit of travel to customer locations with the Middle East and Europe.
Lastly, another great news I wanted to share with you is that I would be coming to Singapore for a week's training as the company is headquartered in Singapore, therefore, it will be a great opportunity to meet you after such a long time. I am sure you will plan something exciting when I am there.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes
Saud
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, lastly, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78217821782 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84080784235 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628712871287 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3743288371 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11273254694 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399134636039 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235442390618 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662147726384 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213650688369 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.