Dear Sarah
I'm just writing to thank you for accepting my proposal to take care of my house and pet in my absence, and want to let you know some instructions related to them.
Actually, I'm going to Goa for a week, and will be staying at 'Windsor hotel' in Vasco De gamma city. In case of any emergency, you can contact Hotel receptionist, or you can make a call to my mobile number which will you find in the diary which I've placed on the table in lobby area.
My dog 'Tommy' is very friendly, and he'll love you. You just have to give him warm milk in his bowl two times a day as he doesn't drink cold milk. Also give him water time to time so that he'll not be dehydrated.
Another duty I want to give you that you have to water my plants daily in the morning time because they easily withered due to scorching heat these days, and make sure maid also groomed garden regularly so that extra leaves can be composed easily.
Keep in touch
Namrata
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... My dog Tommy is very friendly, and hell love you. You just have to give him war...
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...mes a day as he doesnt drink cold milk. Also give him water time to time so that hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26229508197 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10361932142 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1001907071 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162607271262 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633888498569 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441863901061 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101514968332 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381757235239 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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