A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell your friend how they can contact you when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other things they will need to do to take care of your house
Dear Sara,
How are you doing? Thanks for taking care of my dog while I am on holiday. As you know, I am going on a remote location for holiday, I want you to know that if you want to contact me anytime, you can call on my hotel reception that I have already shared with you. Hotel reception will call me to attend phone.
Apart from that, I want to tell you that my pet is very easy going. However, it is very important for him to eat on time, otherwise he can get nasty. Also, please take him to the park in the evening as he really likes to be surrounded with people. Other than that, if in case he catches any infection, please call doctor immediately.
Not but the least, please take care of my house as well. Please do not spread litter in front of the house and try to always keep it clean. In addition to that, my indoor plants can die in case of shortage of water, so please always remember to water them daily.
Thanks for such a kind help!
Best Wishes,
Martina
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, while, apart from, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28421052632 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10299878224 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8211278371 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166289188561 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579370682655 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618699808743 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850591661438 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076719919111 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.