A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend.
Write a reply to your friend
Tell your friend that you understand the problem
Explain what happened to you in the past
Suggest possible solutions to the problem
Dear Pria,
I hope you’re doing well. I have had received your letter a few days back. Due to some urgency at the workplace, I was unable to respond to you.
I am sorry to hear about your problem at work. After reading the letter properly, I came to know that this is a conflict between you and your manager. I know it is hard to concentrate on work when there are some arguments. Actually, the same thing has happened to me in the past.
Last year, when I got a promotion from junior to senior HR manager, I was becoming a prey to bullying. One of my colleagues had tortured me a lot, because of the jealousy. I got to know that he had complained about my performance to the employer. Not only this, he started avoiding me in the group tasks. Therefore, we had a serious fight in the workplace, which thereby resolved by the senior management. So, I can understand that you’re also facing a similar problem.
Don’t worry, I will give you some suggestions that would help you to resolve the issue. Firstly, share the problem with your mentor or any senior employee, as they always act as a mediator in these situations. Secondly, talk to your opponent directly or clearly about your opinions for her, because sometimes the miscommunication leads to conflicts. I hope you’ll get my points.
I am waiting to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Samantha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Pria, I hope you’re doing well. I have had rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66255144033 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7006923368 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625514403292 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2003622395 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6315789474 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7894736842 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.49484536082 669% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320937987516 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882912083351 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694522262654 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180011856651 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590110653677 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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