A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work You have had a similar problem in the past Write a reply to your friend In your letter tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest possi

Hi Laura,

I'm writing this mail to tell you don't worry once I saw your asking me for help this morning. This mahchine learning issue is ususal when we begin to do the data analytic work.
I totally understand your concern because I met this trouble when I was senior student at university. I saw your code and the data source, finding that there were some flaws at the data cleanning part. That's why your model always did not fit the test data well.
So here is my advice that you should modify the data scale correspoding to the machine learning method, since some of them need to be scaled to the range of 0 to 1. As for the other parts you did great job.
Do not hesitate to mail me if you get any trouble on this, it's hard but we can fix this problem. I'm happyily waiting for your reply.

Sincerely,
Tony

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Hi Laura, Im writing this mail to tell you dont worr...
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...ra, Im writing this mail to tell you dont worry once I saw your asking me for hel...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... totally understand your concern because I met this trouble when I was senior stu...
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... some flaws at the data cleanning part. Thats why your model always did not fit the t...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed to be scaled to the range of 0 to 1. As for the other parts you did great job. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29032258065 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12447214476 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0717664582 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233995927562 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859067128067 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511356284616 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140006823282 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203384828214 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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