Dear professor John,
I am writing this letter to make a request from you. By your approval, my work and study will be balanced well. As a fulltime data engineer, I found the study load for me is out of my capability. Let me explain this issue for you.
After my graduation, I received the offer from the company where I am employeed by now. However, the data science in Business is shrinking beyond our imagination due to the economy recession. Thus I joined your computer science part-time evening class to try to start my new career in the IT field.
Unfortunately, I broken my leg in the car accident, I am writing to you in the ward now. The doctor told me it would take me two months in hospital because of my injury. I have to inform you that I can not join the class in person for the last of semester.
I kindly request to propose that if I can cake the class online and finish my assignments and projects remotely? By this mean, I can both work and study online in hospital with no delays.
Thank you for your kindness in advance, I will wait for your response.
Sincerely,
Tony
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...agination due to the economy recession. Thus I joined your computer science part-tim...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... class to try to start my new career in the IT field. Unfortunately, I broken my l...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...to try to start my new career in the IT field. Unfortunately, I broken my leg in ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'broke'?
Suggestion: broke
...r in the IT field. Unfortunately, I broken my leg in the car accident, I am writin...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4362745098 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54136766256 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4631586607 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6153846154 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207284327339 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730205503124 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754206733275 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099113091214 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746521770035 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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