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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.1- Say where you went,2- Where you stayed,3- What you can do there4

Essay topics: A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.

Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.

1- Say where you went,
2- Where you stayed,
3- What you can do there
4- What the food was like.

AminMotamedi's picture

Dear Rose,

You have no idea how happy I am to hear from you after our little road trip to Vermont. That was a very soothing experience for me and we should do this again. Plus, I am super excited that you are taking a quality time with yourself after days of nonstop work. I’d like to recommend a very unique vacation spot and I think you will definitely enjoy it: Bali Island!

I visited Bali two years ago and I stayed in a famous four-star sea resort called Ramada Bing Tang, located in Kuta district in Bali. The place is very close to the airport, like 30 minutes away, so you won’t worry about missing your flights in any circumstances, which I know is of great importance for you. The hotel was very exotic, the ambiance was very friendly, and staffs were super nice to me.

I know you love snorkeling and scuba diving, so you can find your favorite spots near to any beaches there, and don’t forget to stay enough so you can watch the breathtaking sunset vista in this lush island. Also, you can go sightseeing and visit many spiritual temples on the island. Shopping is another option since the prices are interestingly reasonable, and there are so many handicrafts to purchase.

When it comes to food, Bali has it all! There are plenty of different dishes for various tastes, thanks to huge hordes of tourists that visit the island regularly. So you should be able to find anything you want. If you are bold enough, you can go ahead and check salutary seafood out.

I look forward to getting my souvenirs from you the soonest,
Amin

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...stop work. I'd like to recommend a very unique vacation spot and I think you will defi...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61209964413 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40998059831 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64768683274 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.422865322 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354309698939 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131794153924 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917628529395 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200829357483 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580196597164 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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