Dear Jack,
I hope you are doing well.
I writing this letter to let you know about the camping that which things you should keep in mind and what to expect. I have been to many different locations for camping as you know I am quite an outgoing person. I suggest my favourite place, which is called Big-star camping. I know that you are too curious to know about all the fun activities you can do there. I like that site because it is a bit far away from the city and has its own beauty and that too breathtaking. I won't steal your thunder and let you explore.
I know that you have a good appetite and can't live without food, so I suggest you take some food with you. Because last time we had spent a long time searching for a good restaurant at that place. Also, at night, I won't suggest you to keep the food in an open place because there are many animals too, and they might come to your camp location. I heard they damage the property while searching the food. It's bad luck for me that this time I can't join you since I am running on a low budget this summer.
I hope you enjoy the campfire!
Yours sincerely,
Yash.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... Jack, I hope you are doing well. I writing this letter to let you know abo...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...should keep in mind and what to expect. I have been to many different locations f...
^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...mind and what to expect. I have been to many different locations for camping as you know I am ...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you know I am quite an outgoing person. I suggest my favourite place, which is ca...
^
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lace, which is called Big-star camping. I know that you are too curious to know a...
^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll the fun activities you can do there. I like that site because it is a bit far ...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s own beauty and that too breathtaking. I wont steal your thunder and let you exp...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al your thunder and let you explore. I know that you have a good appetite and ...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... know that you have a good appetite and cant live without food, so I suggest you tak...
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Line 7, column 442, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d. Its bad luck for me that this time I cant join you since I am running on a low bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22935779817 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14058540669 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591743119266 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8499204602 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9230769231 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211124301155 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776730507139 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642298444271 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102319550747 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524159134809 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.